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Post can someone help me to correct sentences for the grammar mistake?
1) For me, the experience of unforgetable was difficult.
2) This occurred about four years ago, which it is the first day, I studied in DC public school.
3)As you know, for me English is my second language.
4) When it was the first day i studied in DC, i was only twelve years old young girl.
5) While i stepped though the door get into the school.
6)I was very nervous to be able to answer her question.
7)The first day in class it seemed like a year to me.
8) I walked in the classroom scarily because i knew that of people asked me question i din't know how to answer.
9)My teacher told me don't be afraid be confodence yourself.
10) I didn't know what were teachers talked about.
11)Wanted to improve English faster, i needed to work hard in order to survived in the US.


Mon Dec 31, 2007 3:03 am
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Post Re: can someone help me to correct sentences for the grammar mistake?
1) For me, the difficult experience was unforgettable.
2) This occurred about four years ago, which was the first day that I went to a DC public school.
3) As you know, for me, English is my second language.
4) I was only a twelve year old girl on my first day studying in DC.
5) I stepped though the door get into the school.
6) I was very nervous to answer her question.
7) The first day in class seemed like a year to me.
8) I walked into the classroom worried because I knew that if people asked me questions, I wouldn't know how to answer.
9) My teacher told me not to be afraid and to have confidence in myself.
10) I didn't know what the teachers were talking about.
11) I wanted to improve my English faster, and I needed to work hard in order to survive in the US.

Hope this helps!


Sun Sep 28, 2008 2:27 am
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