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Can someone pls help me to correct the grammar of this quote?
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Hermes
Joined: Thu Oct 04, 2007 1:23 pm
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 Can someone pls help me to correct the grammar of this quote? The grammar may be ok right? What do you think? Any suggestion?
The feeling of excitement and satisfaction found deep within the knowledge of comprehension.
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| Tue Sep 23, 2008 1:24 pm |
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helpfulhannah
Joined: Sun Aug 10, 2008 1:24 pm
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Re: Can someone pls help me to correct the grammar of this quote? Get rid of the word knowledge.
Use "act of comprehension" if you are determined to use those words.
No, the excitement and satisfaction come after the act of comprehension.
You comprehend, then you feel good. So the feeling isn't going to be in the act, it will come after the act of comprehending.
What exactly does "knowledge of comprehension" mean? Can you define it? It's meaningless. It's just words.
Ah, how 'bout:
The feeling of excitement and satisfaction that accompanies the pursuit of knowledge and culminates in comprehension?
Oh, forget it, just do your thing, wrong though it is.
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lepcs
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Re: Can someone pls help me to correct the grammar of this quote? The feeling of excitement and satisfaction "that is" found deep within the knowledge of comprehension
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Lana
Joined: Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:24 pm
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Re: Can someone pls help me to correct the grammar of this quote? um it seems ok but i would make one lil improvement
"The feeling of excitement and satisfaction "is" (or "can be") found deep within the knowledge of comprehension"
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lovinglife
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Re: Can someone pls help me to correct the grammar of this quote? a feeling of satisfaction is found.... deep within...
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Phoebe
Joined: Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:24 pm
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Re: Can someone pls help me to correct the grammar of this quote? Add "is"
"The knowledge of excitement and satisfaction IS found deep within the knowledge of comprehension"
..it is correct alone without IS as a phrase but not a sentence...
you could say that..
"The feeling of excitement and satisfaction found deep within the knowledge of comprehension IS ...."
..it would only be a fragment and must be linked to another clause to be grammatically complete..
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