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Post Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
How do I fix a sentence that has a predication error? For example, "Our resolutions should begin at midnight on Jan 1." How in the world do I fix that sentence please?


Sun Sep 14, 2008 5:02 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
There is nothing wrong with this sentence grammatically. Maybe say: "Our resolutions should begin at midnight on Jan 1, the moment the new year begins." That way you eliminate the confusion about midnight of 12/30 or 1/1.


Tue Sep 16, 2008 4:16 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
Just take out the "on:,


Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:27 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
"our solutions will begin at...."


Sat Sep 20, 2008 4:32 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
On January 1st, at midnight the resolution will begin.


Sat Sep 20, 2008 4:33 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
What's the context of the sentence? There aren't any grammar problems with your sentence. It's a style problem. In formal writing, you're not supposed to assert that others "should" do anything. In order to fix it properly, we'd have to know what the context is, why you said what you said, what you meant by it, and find a way to work around it. Try, for example, "Resolutions often begin at midnight".


Sat Sep 20, 2008 4:35 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
Is midnight January 1 a second before 1/2? Are we supposed to beging then midnight 12/31. Otherwise, whew, what is wrong with that sentence?


Mon Sep 22, 2008 4:39 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
Our resolutions should begin at midnight on Jan. 1st.


Tue Sep 23, 2008 4:48 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
There is nothing wrong with this sentence.


Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:47 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
That sentence has no real problems.

But if this is for school, you might try telling your teacher that unless you have to talk in passive voice all the time, she might just ignore "prediction errors".

Your not writing the rest in present tense, why should you write that sentence that way?


Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:48 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
Reverse "at midnight" and "on Jan 1?. The sentence should be,
"Our resolutions should begin on Jan 1 at midnight."


Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:48 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
Our resolutions should begin at midnight on Jan 1



our resolutions begin jan 1 at midnight.


Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:49 am
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Post Re: Can you please help me with this grammar problem?
Resolutions cannot "begin". They "take effect".
"We begin our resolutions" or "our resolutions take effect".


Thu Sep 25, 2008 4:53 am
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