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It is an introduction to a gold club.

Weijia **** Club occupied 160 000 square meters. The driving range fanned out with 160 meters as width and 300 meters as length. Positioning along the north-south axis,it avoided direct sunshine for players comfort. The Club owns Green and Sand practice zone, 100 parking slots,and public 9-holes practice course ( 130 x 130 yards).

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Weijia **** Club is a full 160,000 square meters. The driving range fans out to 160 meters wide, and is 300 meters long. It is positioned along the north-south axis, to avoid a direct view of the sun. There is also green and sand practice areas, parking for 100, and a 9-hole practice course.

Weijia **** Club occupies 160,000 square meters. The driving range fans out to 160 meters in width and 300 meters in length. Positioned along the north-south axis, it avoids direct sunlight for players comfort. The Club owns a Green and Sand practice zone, 100 parking spaces and a 9-hole public practice course ( 130 x 130 yards).

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Weijia **** Club occupies an amazing 160,000 square meters of land complete with a large driving 300 meters in length and160 meters in width. The range is positioned along the north-south axis, thereby avoiding direct sunlight for players comfort. the Club offers both putting green and sand bunker practice areas, 100 parking slots, and a public 9 hole pracice course (130 x 130 yard) for everyone to enjoy.


I dont understand what 'north-south' axis is.................?????