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How do I rewrite this Help with sentence grammar errors everywhere?



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danny m

Joined: Sat Oct 06, 2007 12:55 am
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Post How do I rewrite this Help with sentence grammar errors everywhere?
When he did all these things, Jacobs was put in a state of oppression, which lead her into making stupid decisions that made her fall into his control.
Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:55 am
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Heather C

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Post Re: How do I rewrite this Help with sentence grammar errors everywhere?
As a result of (these things), Jacobs decended into a state of oppression. This course of action led to (her) making stupid decisions and therefore falling under his control.

Did I understand that right?
Wed Sep 17, 2008 12:48 am
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tracymoo2002

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Post Re: How do I rewrite this Help with sentence grammar errors everywhere?
My re-write:
He did many things to Jacobs, causing her to make stupid decisions and thereby falling more and more under his control.

Good luck!
Sat Sep 27, 2008 12:18 am
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