http://www.protagonize.com/story/hmhas-wolf#comment2965

For some reason i does not matter how slow i read or how loud i read it out loud i see what i want to see and not what is right.

this one was just the as good as any other winter storm.
Dr. McCarthy watch (watch is out of place)


These are just a few things I found in the first few paragraphs. It is much too long to read all the way through. Especially stopping to write down the errors.

I would take it to an adult such as a teacher or librarian. They are pretty handy with words.